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oragami waves
set sail
go astray
in these awkward moving waves
floating on in this place
on top of empty wrinkled space
pack my bags
move away
pacing on day by day
come right back where i lay
in these oragami waves
shout and cry
find my place
circle around in decay
resting hard
will you stay?
but i always go away
desert wind
blowing sand
flowing through these frail hands
come right back where i stand
in this oragami land
silent call
pale shade
as the brightness fades away
sent Your Son, take my faith
turn it into something great
subtle shame
comes again
from behind me strength is gained
settle down in my pain
in this oragami rain
Origami Land
wrinkled, images that welcome you and the portrait of belief in God was the finest I've ever seen outside the Serenity Prayer - faith as an image - nicely woven words and a perfectness in selected connotations - A
Very nice
A very nice poem, very creative and deep.paints many pictures
keep penning
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"Settle down in my pain/ in
"Settle down in my pain/ in this oragami rain"-- I loved that line! This is fantastic! I truly enjoyed this poem!