oragami waves

set sail
go astray
in these awkward moving waves
floating on in this place
on top of empty wrinkled space

 

pack my bags
move away
pacing on day by day
come right back where i lay
in these origami waves

 

shout and cry
find my place
circle around in decay
resting hard

will you stay?
but i always go away

 

desert wind
blowing sand
flowing through these frail hands
come right back where i stand

in this origami land

 

silent call
pale shade
as the brightness fades away
sent Your Son, take my faith
turn it into something great

 

subtle shame
comes again
from behind me strength is gained
settle down in my pain
in this origami rain

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allets's picture

Origami Land

wrinkled, images that welcome you and the portrait of belief in God was the finest I've ever seen outside the Serenity Prayer - faith as an image - nicely woven words and a perfectness in selected connotations - A


 

 

poet610's picture

Very nice

A very nice poem, very creative and deep.paints many pictures
keep penning
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rob2586's picture

"Settle down in my pain/ in

"Settle down in my pain/ in this oragami rain"-- I loved that line! This is fantastic! I truly enjoyed this poem!