overcoming temptation

i hear a hunger again

i feel it crushing the wind

when i close my eyes

he bites at my limbs



all coming sound

seem to drown out

as his teeth nash at me

while i suffer in doubt



well did you know

i have a chance?

did you think

i would let you in?



i feel the rush of the wind

as it sweeps over me

and i open my eyes

i had become set free



the sound rang through out

i heard victory race

shattering his teeth

by the Lord's gift of grace

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i feel the rush of the wind
as it sweeps over me
and i open my eyes
i had become set free

really a good and heartfelt piece..liked it too..seems that you are writing very perfectly..good idea and sweet melodic flow is here..hope my words will also touch your heart ..bets of luck