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overcoming temptation
i feel a hunger again
i feel it crushing the wind
when i close my eyes
he bites at my limbs
all coming sounds
seem to drown out
as his teeth nash at me
while i suffer in doubt
well, did you know
i have a chance?
did you think
i would let you in?
i feel the rush of the wind
as it sweeps over me
and i open my eyes
i had become set free
the sound rang throughout
i saw the victory crown
shattering his teeth
by the Lord's gift of grace
i feel the rush of the wind
as it sweeps over me
and i open my eyes
i had become set free
really a good and heartfelt piece..liked it too..seems that you are writing very perfectly..good idea and sweet melodic flow is here..hope my words will also touch your heart ..bets of luck