To The Poet Ssmoothie, After Reading Her Poem, "Senslesstivity"

Here is the form of Highest Poetry

that rises (like a towering mountain's peak

over that low plaint verse called "Woe Is Me"),

and ascends to the cosmic knowledge that we seek.

 

J-9thxciv

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Wow! I hadnt thought of it

Wow! I hadnt thought of it like that! That just swept over me like a self realisation only it wasnt me realising it! A message in a bottle cap, floating somewhere in the universe of the mind looking for the soul after a broken heart... yeah, I'll claim it, any day of the cosmos. Big hugss Ssmoothie 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you!

Thank you!


J-9th94

unspokenvoice's picture

to the point.. subtle yet

to the point.. subtle yet blunt, really cool

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Thank you,

Thank you,


J-9th94