The Sorrowing Muse Explains Statius' Unfinished Epic, The Achilleid

His flesh as the expression of his soul,

Achilles should have been most beautiful

in Statius' poem; an adolescent boy

of gently formed and delicate affection,

not that crude, bullying brawler at Troy,

a clumsy figure only meant to pander

to fools like those who strut through Homer's slander.

 

Alas for Statius---Rome's mythic deceit

misled him from my pueryl inspiration

to write Achilles as an imitation

of some uncouth, on any Roman street,

staggered by booze, not feelings' introspection.

 

at least the manuscript is incomplete;

but how much more dismal is my dejection.

 

J-Called

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