Footnote: Instead Of Capital Punishment

He brutally killed

people---to pass dull nights: the

sentence---swing!---was too

easy, too quick---should have been

solitary confinement

into the hell of himself.

 

Kyakuchuu

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The Tanka is extended by a sixth line after the precedent established my Mokichi Saito.

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