Footnote: To Old Bolsheviks, Like, Say, Janis Rudzutaks

Comrade Lenin did

say that deaths must occur to

achieve the Marxist

good.  That was acceptable---

it was for the People's sake---

until your life was condemned.

 

Kyakuchuu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Although I prefer, mostly, to comply with the format of the five line tanka, I acknowledge the precedent of Mokichi Saito, who extended the traditional Tanka by one line of seven syllables.  In this case, and with the number six being used in the New Testament as a symbol of imperfection or downright evil, the extension seemed appropriate in a Tanka about a Bolshevik.

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