The stars bear witness
to eternity---as hope
and fact. They should know:
they have been at it lomger
than you and I together.
Kyakuchuu
You sent up a flare of wisdom that burns bright because it comes to us, not in a pompous sermon, but in graceful, authentic wit. Love this!
Thank you. I thought, at first, the last two lines sounded too casual, but then they struck me as appropriate to the conversational tone I wanted the poem to have. Thanks for the very fine comment.
Starward
You sent up a flare of wisdom
You sent up a flare of wisdom that burns bright because it comes to us, not in a pompous sermon, but in graceful, authentic wit. Love this!
Thank you. I thought, at
Thank you. I thought, at first, the last two lines sounded too casual, but then they struck me as appropriate to the conversational tone I wanted the poem to have. Thanks for the very fine comment.
Starward