My heart bleeds, yearning for pain
Burning, oh burning eyes, wondering gaze
Screaming, thrashing, the flesh pulls away
Oh crimson rivers, flowing over my cheeks
My hands oh they tremble, they tremble
Blood soaked, quivering under view
Howling darkness blanketing my sight
Oh the pain it engulfs me mind and body
My soul hisses unsatisfied with simple pain
Raging, oh raging soul, how might I please you?
Shrieking, piercing deafening sounds, silence
Oh so quiet, everything so very quiet
My heart scabs, healing after the agony
Relief, oh desired relief once again paid
Breathing, inhaling, the air escapes my lungs.
great job!! extremely vivid writing, and it's great to challenge ourselves time and again. I need to do more of that.