Remove your palm from my leg,
It belongs there no more
Take back all your words,
I have no need for them any longer
Retrieve your embrace from my lips,
Your kiss is boring and tastes bitter
Stop gazing at my body further,
It's becoming repetitive and routine
Sop up yesterdays tears quickly,
Return them, you don't deserve them
Give back my torn emotions please,
You don't deserve that weakening satisfaction
But please don't give back the time shared,
For I now know who you really are
Don't forget I once loved you deeply,
Headlines read: The women who loved a boy.
So true, I fell into that trap a few times. It hurts. WEll written.
LaRae
wow this poem is seeping with anger and pain
it hurts to read it
I love it, I think it is perfectly worded
the poor "boy" must have been crushed by these words
keep up the good work
much love
Ashley
Much Love
Ashley
God, that boy needs to grow up. He didnt know what he lost. seriously. You went through so much pain and it seemed like he didnt even care. He is a "boy" and will probably remain that way.
Your poem was really good Robin. It must be good cause Shi-Eun NEVER critiques peoms, so it must be good. hehe. but yeah, good poem girly, I know u well find someone WAY better the Pat. Geez, anyone is better for u then him. ;)
love a friend,
Sherry
Good poem! I think that we don't ever really grow up. Even 30, 50, 75 year olds need guidance.
especialy people at this age - as in 19th/20th. they think they've all grown up. yelling things like "Im not a kid anymore!" but i think we are still little kids with ALOT to learn.
hmmmm i wonder if that has anything t odo with the poem?!
meh well it got me thiking in that respect.
great poem!
Know how ya feel
Miss your writings, you need to keep it up :)
<3