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Summer Pain
Summer brings..
Usually beautiful summer things
But now a nagging pain
Haunts me once again
Deafening screams, blinding light
She'll pull though mum says she might
But her chances are looking grim
Like the chances of a cup filled to it's brim
Hanging on to a glipms of hope
But time is fraying away at the rope
Hour by hour she will not wake
For this deep sleep she unwillingly chose to take
The tears trickle down from my eye
I can't hold back this urge to cry
The rain sounds quietly on the ground
My heart screams in pain but makes no sound
Be strong mum says and this I'll try
But I can't shake the pain of another goodbye.
I loved the poem
it truly expresses your pain
keep up the great work and may god bless you
You capture the emotion
I know its hard, everyones here for you
*smile thru the tears*
Lifes a bitch...I hear ya hun... ugh.
Good poem.... She'd be proud... smile 4 me hun. love jenn
hi hun.... im sorry to hear the bad news, i know exactly what your going through and its surely no summer fun. my grand-father had numerous strokes 3 summers ago and the pain was unbearable. if this person is your mom's mother, then i know it must be harder on her, since its her own mother...i give my sympathy for you both and david, and dont let go of that rope just yet, there's always lengthly amounts of time left so dont you worry about a thing! hang on hun, im with you on this one.... XOXO