You left, and I started to cry
I mean why wouldn't I
I didn't see it coming
To think I, was worth loving
I'm empty, cant seem to live
I have nothing left to give
Now whats there to say
When my love, my life, is taken away?
Oh but nothings what it seemed
For this was just something that I dreamed
I really enjoyed this poem. Actually I can't recall reading a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you wouldn't mind I'd appreciate it if you would take a look at a few of my works and give me some pointers.
Your writing seam so familiar, it is like I read them and look back into my own past. Thank you.