Untitled -- 5.12.2002

You left, and I started to cry

I mean why wouldn't I

I didn't see it coming

To think I, was worth loving

I'm empty, cant seem to live

I have nothing left to give

Now whats there to say

When my love, my life, is taken away?

Oh but nothings what it seemed

For this was just something that I dreamed

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It was just a dream, thank god. Please excuse my grammar :)

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Travis Scott's picture

I really enjoyed this poem. Actually I can't recall reading a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you wouldn't mind I'd appreciate it if you would take a look at a few of my works and give me some pointers.

Remaining Anonymous's picture

Your writing seam so familiar, it is like I read them and look back into my own past. Thank you.