Rose petals float through the air
Carries with in, deep despair
All at once tears fall free
Complete and utter misery
Sit tight precious the pain will end
Death the new, horrible trend
Eyes wide shut, a bitter gaze
Anger, frustration set a blaze
Understand not what is seen
See only what could have been
A wish that never will come true
To give back the pain, and bring back you.
Hey there,
Well, this is a very sad poem. I like your style of writing. I just wish I could write like that. ANywayz, great job with the poem...good flow...wonderful rhyme...keep it up =)
~ Hidden Illusion ~
yeah, its so hard to know that thej people u love end up dying so soon. RIP Elie and Claude!
i luv this one so much, awesome job... i know the feeling of this poem - when peope leave our lives it really can feel as though only misery exists. times like these im really grateful to poetry for being such an escape. keep on writing.
luv
Marina