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Realities Dreams
The sun is shining once again
But there's still a bitter darkness
That beckons me to fall
Endlessly in to the pits of (hell)?
No nets to catch me
No rocks to cling to
Only a never ending fall
Gasping, clawing at the air
Speeding towards nothing
Only a forgotten truth
That reminds me
Of the mistakes I've made
Yet I feel no pain
Until I hit the ground
And I wake up.
Wow Robin, I wonder why no one critiqued this one!
I found it really impressive! I felt a chill down my spine
as I pictured the feeling of falling. This poem really hit me. I felt my self absorbed and saw and felt everything happen. damn! very cinematic