Yet again I'm mourning friends
From above the angel of death god did send
Graduation isn't looking so bright
They didn't even have the chance to fight--
For their lives that tragically ceased
They should have had the chance atleast
We talked just the other day
I was excited to know he would be coming my way
A friend I had seen so long ago
How much more can our hearts bestow
Already gone I can't say goodbye
Everything seems to make me cry
The truth is set but it feels unreal
2 more souls heaven did steal
The world, this life has taken it's toll
Another day and another stolen soul.
Hey there,
Seems like a lot of people close to you has died...I'm so sorry. I can't say that I know how it feels like cuz it never happened to me (and I hope it never will) but I think you're a really strong girl..I can tell just by reading your poems...after all the people that died, I can still see some poems full of hope...now that's something I know I can't do! Just keep it up girl! Great job with the poem =)
~ Hidden Illusion ~
this one made me cry i just lost my dad 2 week's back i know how you feel not wanting to see that its real i write to make me feel better but nothing can make the pain of loseing someone go but poems like your's help a lot so thank you. keep it up your very good!!!
hey robin,
I feel ya. I still cant believe they are gone. they were the nicest guys in sheet harbour and they didnt desrve to die.
RIP Elie and Claude
hey, i usually dont do the whole critiqu thing, but basically this is everything im feelin, we didnt talk as much as u guys, but its still hard to believe they r gone, but we will get through it all toghether....
*honk* *sob* I know Robin...I dont know what to say, no onw does
Im just glad I still have all you guys
peace and luv
Kitty_Cat