Destination Suicide

Left alone in so much pain

Nothing to lose nothing to gain

Eyes filled with tears, one thought in mind

Search the shelves the gun you can't find

Anger grows strong

Deeper sense you don't belong

Turn the corner ever so slow

The wrong way she did it, the right way you know

Slide open the drawer retrieve the blade

The blade to dull for sharpness you prayed

Then there's a smash, and glass all around

Pick up the sharpest piece you can find off the ground

Into the bathroom you close the door

Your not so sure you can do it anymore

But you get up your nerve the glass finds the skin

And with a few moments the room starts to spin

You drop to your knees, the blood there to much

The pain is intense, you didn't think it would hurt as such

You look around your vision blurred  

You're to weak to scream, your words can't be heard

So as you lay dying one thought in your head

Nothing to worry about now, because you'll soon be dead

Your mother, your father, your brothers they cried

For you sought and found your destination suicide.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

My friend told me he thought like this.. so I wrote about it..

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Abbey Reeder's picture

i really like this poem and its all so true with so many people in this world. i have even felt this way, way too many times in my life and at times i hated when i got this depressed and got the points of wanting to just end it all. once again, really good poem.

Hidden Illusion's picture

Hey there,

This poem is amazing. Good flow...and excellent rhyming. I love it. Keep up the good work.

~ Hidden Illusion ~

Marianne Chrisos's picture

I think I've read this before, deciding I should critique only now. Pretty powerful stuff. The thing with despresion is I don't feel much of anything anymore...so I can relate to this poem. Good work, I think.

Reco Humphrey's picture

great job in capturing his feelings. Thats one thing I struggle with in writting you seem to have the bull by the horns. I to think like this sometimes but thanks to god and hating pain I'M STILL ALIVE!!!!

Patrick Patterson's picture

I dearly hope that this peice is in no way autobiographical Be a waste of a perfectly good poet. Not to mention being very traumatic to any farm animals in the imidiate vicinity.