Left alone in so much pain
Nothing to lose nothing to gain
Eyes filled with tears, one thought in mind
Search the shelves the gun you can't find
Anger grows strong
Deeper sense you don't belong
Turn the corner ever so slow
The wrong way she did it, the right way you know
Slide open the drawer retrieve the blade
The blade to dull for sharpness you prayed
Then there's a smash, and glass all around
Pick up the sharpest piece you can find off the ground
Into the bathroom you close the door
Your not so sure you can do it anymore
But you get up your nerve the glass finds the skin
And with a few moments the room starts to spin
You drop to your knees, the blood there to much
The pain is intense, you didn't think it would hurt as such
You look around your vision blurred
You're to weak to scream, your words can't be heard
So as you lay dying one thought in your head
Nothing to worry about now, because you'll soon be dead
Your mother, your father, your brothers they cried
For you sought and found your destination suicide.
i really like this poem and its all so true with so many people in this world. i have even felt this way, way too many times in my life and at times i hated when i got this depressed and got the points of wanting to just end it all. once again, really good poem.
Hey there,
This poem is amazing. Good flow...and excellent rhyming. I love it. Keep up the good work.
~ Hidden Illusion ~
I think I've read this before, deciding I should critique only now. Pretty powerful stuff. The thing with despresion is I don't feel much of anything anymore...so I can relate to this poem. Good work, I think.
great job in capturing his feelings. Thats one thing I struggle with in writting you seem to have the bull by the horns. I to think like this sometimes but thanks to god and hating pain I'M STILL ALIVE!!!!
I dearly hope that this peice is in no way autobiographical Be a waste of a perfectly good poet. Not to mention being very traumatic to any farm animals in the imidiate vicinity.