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Honest Lies

I'm here but I'm not

I'm quiet but I talk a lot

My eyes are closed but wide open

I was serious but I was jokin

I'll catch you but you'll fall

I'm smart but know nothing at all

I'll save you but let you drown

I smile but its a frown

I tell the truth in honest lies

Silence speaks through screaming eyes.




Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just some thoughts on how some people twist things around. Honest lies.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 4:11am
©24 September 2001 - 9:09pm — starlite_angel
19 September 2002 - 4:46pm — Hidden Illusion (not verified)
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Hey there,

Well, another amazing poem. I'm not surprised! You're a very talented girl. I just love the way you rhymed it. Good job.

~ Hidden Illusion ~

9 August 2002 - 8:25am — Richy Berry (not verified)
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That poem was awesome. True people twist things around a lot. You can really feel it. Good work.

22 May 2002 - 11:57pm — Jessica Amy LeBlanc (not verified)
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I like your rhyme scheme here... And the contradictions you use. I did one with a condratiction in it.. Check it out it's called " I Promise" Thanks again Robin! You da sHit!

25 September 2001 - 9:09pm — Deceptive Wayz (not verified)
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Hey again, great poem Robin :) Keep up the great work beautiful.

25 September 2001 - 9:09pm — Cat Deale (not verified)
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WOWOWOWWOWOWOW!!!!! hey Robin, I really liked this one!!!! It had an attitdude that spoke.....AWSOME!!!! haha : ) peace ~^^~