Hold them in
Hold in all the feelings I'm feelin
Take a deep breath and hold it
All these feeling I can't make fit
I feel like a puzzel scattered all around
Sit back in my chair I don't make a sound
So much pain that I wont show
Keep it in so no one will know
I promised myself, and I'll keep it this time
Never to commit the crime
Of cryin over someone
The pain the hurt has already been done
I floated apon my own fate
I guess I was born with this trait
To be so easy to persuade
With Choices that I've made
I'm not sure what to do
Somethings are just to good to be true
Dry tears roll down a dampened cheek
I utter words but cannot speak
As the night nears
I'm crying silent tears.
Another good write, Robin.
kat
man, ok I love it!! I loved how you were able to take what I was thinking and throw it into beautifully written poetry form. man, why didn't I think of doing that? well, I guess thats why I wear helmets. keep this trend of great poems coming. cause if you don't, I'll so shake you. man, I should really cut it with the death threats. I'm sorry robin. I heart you!
Hey dear...unfortunately..I know how you feel...and what this is about. Trust me..believe me..its ok to cry..and Ive got shoulders you can borrow. But another good poem.. :O) luv ya lots! peace/luv and cookies (hahah yeah u canborrow 75 for a cookie)... jenn.
Although I don't know you personally I definitly know the feeling of losing someone and not wanting to give them the satisfaction of seeing you cry. another bomb ass poem great job