Painful Silence

Theres a cold chill in the air

And a loud silence hurts my ears

Crunch of rocks under my feet

Echo's in the abandoned town

Filled with people

Why can't I see the people right in front of me?

The lonliness seems to blur them out

Hear nothing, see nothing

Other then the crowded empty streets

The more people the more alone I feel

The painful silence grows

And then dies off to an annoying

Buzz of a flatline.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Maybe you can make something out of this. It's funny how you can feel so alone in a room filled with people.I was having a moment when I wrote this, I seem to have them a lot lately.

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Shi-Eun Kim's picture

ahhhhhh i know exactly ohw you are feelin
i feel like more people there is, the more pepole I don't know and less important I feel.

but i know it's bullshit.

if you feel like this, i hope you snap out of it soon!

You are the COOL one! One and only :)

Cat Deale's picture

I know this feeling
Being around so many people you love and know
And feel like youre nothing and all alone
~^^~