dreams on strings
flown by butterfly wings
covered by thoughtless bliss
trailed by happiness
shafts of light
as hopes take flight
underneath the sun
when the best is to be done
the greatest gift
can come so swift
on a dream on a string
flown by butterfly wings
Hey you are a really great writer!! keep writing and i hope some day i have some time to persue all of your works...
**I would be honored if you critiqued my poems as well :)**
*Becca*May*
BEAUTIFUL WORK
i like this poem :*)