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Lovestoned Animated chaos of the worlds and beyond, I heard
Living among the crystal clouds, on the wings of a bird,
And drifted a sweet symphony, an uncanny sound
Reflected off from the cosmos, that shook my ground;
Could have been wonderful reality, or a surreal dream -
Your voice, like roseblossoms, on a gliding stream!
Stormy seas and crimson skies, all I did see and brave;
Strangers from strange lands I passed, to them I did wave;
But sapphire ocean eyes brought me to my knees, for I'd never met
Doe-shaped full of loving secrets, something that I'd never forget;
Might have been the sweetest illusion, in the darkest light -
Your eyes, like roseblossoms, on a lonely summer night!
Drunk high from the nectar of the stars, I stared -
Blurred collages of beautiful faces and limbs, layered -
But one I glimpsed fit for the rainbows, so profound;
Next the walls were closed on me, never again a sound -
Such a shame we would never know, shall I ever meet
Your face, like roseblossoms, ever so heavenly sweet?
beautiful
it was beautiful. i loved it. very emotional. i think all poets have romance in them and i love it when it is shown. well done. i hope you can find the time to read and comment on my poems. I hope they are as good as hers. thanks for sharing
Wonderful!
I'll call it an amazing piece of art since it appears perfect to me.
thanking you respected sir
thanking you respected sir for your valuable time n amazing words :)
you
Nice read. Thanks for sharing. What a wonderful sentiment/compliment. Kudos to you.
yvette2014
thank you for this wonderful
thank you for this wonderful comment :)
Once again truly humbled in
Once again truly humbled in your presence :D
no need for you to be such
no need for you to be such humble :) i just try to write, n if possible, rhyme
anyway, thank you :)
Roseblossoms is indeed a romantic poet on this site
Glad you wrote something for her.
©bishu
thank you sir. she totally
thank you sir. she totally deserved it :)
amazing piece
amazing piece
thank you :)
thank you :)
A wonderful write. My
A wonderful write. My pleasure.
thank you. glad you liked it
thank you. glad you liked it :)