the art of fucking up your poetry

Tryin to write some meaningful shit,

something thats gonna bubble up in someones chest

and send them on to some euphoric state that somehow transforms the way they think.

nothing but bullshit seems to be scripted by that foggy mind of mine. 

Im not fooling anyone. I need this shit like a slut needs a warm cock.

I miss my crowd, 
I miss my words  

I miss my crooked tiara. 

wrote a whole stupid book in 6 months but cant write a line of poetry to save me

I guess its another fuck up in a line of edless fuck ups

a few scattered gems, lines mostly, cluttered by cumbersome dallying words.

I said too much but havemt said enough.

whatever.

it seems ive got mediocrity down to a fine art.

miss you anyway, love you just as much if it helps.

Just wanted you to feel something.

 

 

 

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Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

It comes and goes. It

It comes and goes. It dissappears without warning then one day when you least expect it, there it is waiting for you again. Good luck SS.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

schmuckjones's picture

Hey now...

I think your always good SS.  I'll always read you.  No matter how common or unique you feel at the present time.  You are great!   

allets's picture

Euphoric States

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Graphic descriptions of hot and lots of sex always leave me in a euphoric state . . . you rock! (but jest aside, tell us what you really think). You are clear. I like that about your work, it's honest - Lady A

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