its time for an artificially ssweetened poem*

its time.

you have twisted my thoughts enough.

you beg me to write about you,

you swarm my home with words from every direction

desperate admiration

unattractive attentions ironically invite compassionate beauty

such a skiddish mind argues in loop holes to stay safe

you have begged with every thought worthy or unworthy

you have given your all,

now you ask for my sumation of the cracks and all,

glimpses of your dark winding whirlwind of sweet scrawling squalls,

like golden leaves flickering in the sun,

 a glimmer of shimmer in a twisting dark mess

I have seen them.

yet, I will not describe them beyond this,

 for I fear you may be dissapointed by my standards of beauty.

I have many versions and you have sat ever so lightly on all but some.

I send a kiss to float down upon your troubled brow,

you have succeeded in inspiring me,

with your twister of twisted verse,

and i have found some deep beauty where others find perverse

hugss

Author's Notes/Comments: 

rhyming patterns do not exist in my world. I dont need a rhyme for a reason or a reason for a rhyme i let it come if it wants or hide as it will.

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Wow Ssweetie! That's really

Wow Ssweetie! That's really great! Loveeely imagery!


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hey! my lovely how is

hey! my lovely how is everything going? you starting to feel better now that the worst of it is nearly over? been thinking of you. hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

Hey Ssweetie! I'm doing a

Hey Ssweetie! I'm doing a little better.. not a whole lot, but I haven't.. you know.... in about a week i think.. Yay. And awes, thanks for thinking of me luv!

Hugggsss


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This is awesome .  The whole thing . 

"like golden leaves flickering in the sun a glimmer of shimmer in a mess..

I have seen them."

 
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thankyou my sweet! hugss good

thankyou my dear! I hope you are winning your battles ! ;) hugss again!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."