new*

...

can you make me brand new*?

can you take me with you?

can you?

...

I want to shine back like the twinkle in your eyes

to hush you with my soft lips and sign the language of love

bury my self deep inside you and wash my self clean

can you make me brand new?

can you?

...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

inspired by nightlights poem 'New' in some relative way ;) hugss

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ramonathompsont's picture

How nice it would be to find

How nice it would be to find someone to do that.

bishu's picture

Turning over a new leaf.. Very true Respected SS

Turning over a new leaf.. Very true Respected SS.The grime does indeed settle down hard on the mind & body.Cleaning and purging is nice once in a while. Gives fresh energy and bounce. Nice to read specially with the Darling New Missy 2014 knocking at the door.2013 now seems like an old hag !!!!!!! So very nice writing.~An~alien~almost~very~far~away


©bishu 

 

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OK ready?  Close your eyes

OK ready?  Close your eyes and click your heels three times and say"THERE'S NO PLACE LIKE POST POEMS, THERE'S NO PLACE LIKE POST POEMS, THERE'S NO PLACE LIKE...ETC."

hey, and if it works please do let me know...lol ;-)

 

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

bishu's picture

Yeah happiness in the backyard not recognized.Nice comment Respe

 Yeah happiness in the backyard not recognized.Nice comment Respected nightlight1220.Specially loved the video


©bishu 

 

nightlight1220's picture

But for real, I usually treat

But for real, I usually treat myself to a massage. Does it every time. Everything just looks different after hot stones.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

allets's picture

Love This Title

The poem is full of endless possibilities and done in a few words bookcased by questions just as it should - lovely writing this ~Lady A~