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Heart aesthetics a breath drawn ever so lightly
so cautiously aware.
the rain drops fell lightly and kissed the dry ground.
a blessing eases out from under a rock
blood from a stone turned to wine
the cool breeze caressess
and the heat slips into sleepy embers
the wind gently consoles.
the nagging worry eases on the shoulder
knowing too well the conjuresome
tricks of the fire storm.
a breath, a beat;
a sideways glance;
a view to a kill.
hey
hey. gave it a read. this isn't one of my favorites. It's morbid. There's blood and dead involved. I'd rather be alive, overcoming obstacles in their lives, and starting new ventures.
;-)
One of the things I so love about your poetry is your range. This one so captivating for me, as the voice I read it with was a soft whisper, coming from just over my shoulder. Great writing, great emotion & great impact Dear!
This one's really good and
This one's really good and then the ending is unexpected it really just makes the whole poem, SSmoothie.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
It's even better the second
It's even better the second and third times...!!!
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Sounds like you are in need
Sounds like you are in need of a reprieve. Beautiful poem, SS though a little dark.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
Desperately need one my
Desperately need one my wonderful diamond. Hopefully soon! Hugss ps I really appreciate your comments I will be back soon to catch up with everyone's writings. For now I'm just trying to catch my breath!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."