Tangled..

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my designs for you don't match your own

A telling tale of how far we've grown.

 

My lovely lines

all tangled and torn 

yours won't bend or dip in time 

your lines too irregular for mine 

 

Please don't design yourself around me any more 

I can bearly breathe I confess; my heart lines are all a mess!

 

you don't take the care to give the freedom I do 

my arches lay bare for you to go through

You reach right in and tie me in knots 

it isn't the first time you forgot.

 

please don't draw your designs on me 

they tangle me up so

don't choke me, please no,

I don't want to go.

 

Reaching for you has become a chore 

tangles and crossed lines and more

 

time me to draw the line in the proverbial sand 

Though you and I will still hold hands 

 

please dont tangle me up any more 

I promise not to too either for sure,

 

let's just draw our designs on either side

holding hands following the same line

and let the windy trails twist them up as we leave them to mingle and twine.

I'll stay yours and you'll stay mine 

and weave our way into a grand new design!

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I lost the simpler cleaner version die to line drop out. I think I over compensated the first was so much better. Oh well them the breaks kiddo. :/ 

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bishu's picture

Lovely palmistry Respected SS

Lovely palmistry  Respected SS.BTW Congrats for your 900th post.I'll NEVER make the figure !!!


©bishu 

 

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Thank you bishu! Hugss 

Thank you bishu! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

nightlight1220's picture

Very nice!!  But oh...the

Very nice!!  But oh...the tangled webs we weave--even when we don't set out to deceive, Fear so abound when we feel oppressed, Because humanity's learning that love is some "test", To taste of bitters with the sweets, Can often prove to be the best treat, So watch those webs now nearing Hallow's Eve, And don't miss out on the love you may be meant to receive!

 

 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

SSmoothie's picture

Very good advice indeed

Very good advice indeed nightlight! I too think that with out the bitter you can't judge the sweet, and yes the right mix of two like anything in life religion politics etc is a beautiful balancing act with satisfaction when we get it just right a rich and rewarding life! ;) thank you love your comments! hugSS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."