erotismicagapea

He drew designs of passion on my naked flesh with his fingertips

the rythym slow and winding delicately, pensively around the tightly wound delicate-est parts of me.

 

It was as if he were tracing every line, every beauty every imperfection that was my essence in physicality,

and on occasion he looked deep into my eyes for further permissions to which I could not answer held hostage by his touch and my indelicate wanting.

 

The bottom of my lip curled up in a tooth nip constrained the torrernt of love words that threatened to pour from my mouth, breath doing its best to find regulation and all I wanted was to be lost in His adoring admiration floating anywhere in his abyss contented just to stare at his unorthodox beauty, fashioned by his strength and decisiveness and above all the way his soul knew mine.

 

It was a separation unbearable made more so, by the powerful burning longing ignited by his feathery touch. caught somewhere between sweet Nirvana and torturous Hades;  not sure which toe was dipped in which?  These were fleeting thoughts that brought me through my confusion and closer to the clarity of madness. Eyes now intent on discovering him, devouing him with each twist and turn of his strong limbs. my fingertips begining to free themselves from thier trance, reach hesitantly when finally touched its destination a gasping pleasure realsed its self from his throat as i slowly realise my touch equally burning my own design trails of longing fire. He threatened to lose control of, breathing love and fire passion as the lines of desire's designs brought fourth an achictectural beauty that ochestrated prisimic baptismal fire that no other 

could have pervaded;  and the words written in the burning flesh had no name just symbols, traced over and over again still not enough to capture meaning. It was all we had but it was enough to sign our love endless to the ages of ages to come. 

 

some say there is a word that comes so close though many more words are missing, forgotten but still felt penultimate erotismicagapea the unity of all things designed to be craved by love. 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just an intimate moment. 

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The_Mav's picture

Oh, wow, oh wow, oh

Oh, wow, oh wow, oh wow! 

This is why it's a crime for you " not to feel you poetry like you used to! " this is incredible! Erotic and loaded! Love it! 


If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream! 

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Been there...explained

Been there...explained beautifully... but I am not sure that words can do that justice...especially if you have it done with your eyes closed. ~peeeeeeeaaace~

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Words may only try... Eyes

Words may only try... Eyes closed!?? What a rip off! Lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

nightlight1220's picture

don't knock it til you try

don't knock it til you try it... i bet when you do you're come back and sound different...lol.

..........peace~


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Oh I've tried it far less

Oh I've tried it far less sensual and the words are more stunning with the visual, mind you it helps when they are beautiful, sexy and hot... Otherwise eyes wide shut thanks lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."