She sits alone at the edge of a corner of a star
melting her soul into tears of light,
bleeding them into the universe
Pouring her love out a rain of falling stars
Her soul song so gentle, soft and longing.
she lost her way confused and captivated
by glorious lights so beautiful and fun!
Recklessly she allowed them to drag her by her curiosity
and when they tired of her left her there in the vast spaces
he warned her not to go, and pulled with all his might
But they were too many and overwhelming though he would not let go
till she chided him, for she mistook his strength for weakness
and so taken by this dazzling kafuffle
cut his heart strings from her as if they were nothing.
he bled into the darkness,
a soul tear broke free from the deepest part of his soul
and flung itself into the abyss and instantly he felt the missing
it had followed her he had no choice,
for it is love and it has no reason.
she thought as she suddenly felt in her core, the missing.
"where are you my love, my angel of mercy, my guiding light?
she counts the endless heavenly bodies she searched
trying to find his love light
tired from looking in every place of the spaces.
I am soul lost without you She cried
her Heart strings fluttering searching for thier tethers
No sign; just sigh after sigh
too silly to look everywhere in sight,
except behind her Where a piece of him stayed.
Alas, she felt could not look back behind her
she did not dare for shame
And with her heart song of repentance
singing out into the endless universe
she unknowingly sends herself further away.
silently searching dissolved hopes
she felt completely broken as she bled out
watching her tears of light swirl into oblivion.
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Edited re written with Allets
Edited re written with Allets in mind :) hugss n thanks
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ethereal Write So Finished
The opening of this poem captured lots of attention from my soul ~ Love right in front of you, and you just gotta roam and regret later. I pause at the last two verses especially emphasizing enormous loss and regret. ~A~
Still needs a tweak... What
Still needs a tweak... What do think Allets?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."