Oblivious

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Soulmates II

 

She sits alone at the edge of a corner of a star

melting her soul into tears of light,

bleeding them into the universe 

Pouring her love out a rain of falling stars

Her soul song so gentle, soft and longing.

 

she lost her way confused and captivated

by glorious lights so beautiful and fun! 

Recklessly she allowed them to drag her by her curiosity 

and when they tired of her left her there in the vast spaces

 

he warned her not to go, and pulled with all his might

But they were too many and overwhelming though he would not let go

till she chided him, for she mistook his strength for weakness 

and so taken by this dazzling kafuffle

cut his heart strings from her as if they were nothing. 

 

he bled into the darkness,

a soul tear broke free from the deepest part of his soul

and flung itself into the abyss and instantly he felt the missing 

it had followed her he had no choice,

for it is love and it has no reason.

 

she thought as she suddenly felt in her core, the missing. 

"where are you my love, my angel of mercy, my guiding light? 

 she counts the endless heavenly bodies she searched 

trying to find his love light

 

tired from looking in every place of the spaces.

I am soul lost without you  She cried

her Heart strings fluttering searching for thier tethers 

 

No sign;  just sigh after sigh

too silly to look everywhere in sight,

except behind her Where a piece of him stayed. 

 

Alas,  she felt could not look back behind her

she did not dare for shame

And with her heart song of repentance

singing out into the endless universe 

she unknowingly sends herself further away.

 

silently searching dissolved hopes 

she felt completely broken as she bled out

watching her tears of light swirl into oblivion.

 

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

It may continue, it may not. Should it? What do. You think? :) 

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Edited re written with Allets

Edited re written with Allets in mind :) hugss n thanks 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Ethereal Write So Finished

The opening of this poem captured lots of attention from my soul ~ Love right in front of you, and you just gotta roam and regret later. I pause at the last two verses especially emphasizing enormous loss and regret. ~A~


 

 

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Still needs a tweak... What

Still needs a tweak... What do think Allets? 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."