The Pain Amoeba

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tragedy

Thoughts drip from my mind as

globulous glassy fluids of emotion.

 

The curtains drawn,

the veil of love lifted and

bare truths litter the ground

at my feet.

 

Starry dreamlike flickers

each turned into glaring suns of acceptance;

the loss confounds me.

 

Amoebas shifting, pushing.

Meniscus pulls back each rush of liquid mess

my heart squeezes through new eyes

in its feeble attempt to fill the void

so glaringly obvious now 

with something, anything.

 

All sense of knowing lost.

The fabric of my undestanding

torn from under me.

 

As I fall 

Betrayal nudges the corners of realisation

but its too loud an echo to pay attention.

 

Not ready yet.

 

As the liquid marbles

load up and fire their last

passionate pleas for compassion

the reality knocks intently

I push to keep it out 

A long and useless fight.

 

Ameobas of pain Take me over.


Senseless,

nothing left to try.

I brace;

waiting for the tears to run dry... 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's all relative... 

Pother ideas to add amoebas clawing fingerlike projections calling pain into existence drawing attention like a virus... Etc... 

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mrpoofs's picture

so many sads in this poem.

so many sads in this poem. you portray well though

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Yes mr poofs thanks its been

Yes mr poofs thanks its been a hard road athere're s no end in sight, but I fight it all the way! ;) thanks 


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"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Oh smoothie. So sad! Hugs

Oh smoothie. So sad! Hugs


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Thanks Hun, some time life

Thanks Hun, some time life just is so sad. Hugss back :) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Ok edited,  good or bad let

Ok edited,  good or bad let me know cheers SS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I'm not exactly sure what you

I'm not exactly sure what you changed but it sure does read well. :) It might be inspiring me. Not sure yet.


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Uh, sorry posted wrong

Uh, sorry posted wrong version! How about now? 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Um... Still beautiful! 

Um... Still beautiful! 


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Thanks Hun :) hugss 

Thanks Hun :) hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."