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Don't speak of tragedy
like it was nearly avoided.
Don't speak of love
as if you never had it.
Don't live as if
we never knew.
Don't speak of me
as if I was no one.
Dont make ordinary
our extraordinary.
Don't speak of denials
or missed chances.
It was a once in many lifetimes
And now after so long,
our eyes meet.
You don't speak.
I saw.
It was all there again
in your eyes.
You dont speak.
The sounds
only drown
in the waterfalls
falling from your lies.
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Really enjoed this piece, it
Really enjoed this piece, it breaks through the wall, could perhaps capture the emotion pouring out our soul. top notch
Yes indeed! But first!
Yes indeed! But first! CRUXNATION!!!!!! :D long time no see! welcome back! Thanks sweet hugss SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thanks, yeh ive been away for
thanks, yeh ive been away for a while from here, missed you guys and all these talented pieces of art
Yes and we get to enjoy your
Yes and we get to enjoy your talents as well! A win-win! ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Love how your firey
Love how your firey throughout the work then end it on an icy note.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
Diamond!! Always a pleasure
Diamond!! Always a pleasure to hear from you! So glad you're back this place needed your colour! :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
i love that line ss dont
i love that line ss dont speak of tradgedy as if it were nearly averted
and that last stanza wow, i love how you see things!!! missed reading your stuff!=D
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Hey moonshadow! Long time no
Hey moonshadow! Long time no see! How is everything?. Missed you HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Nicely done, although there's
Nicely done, although there's one to many ' dont speaks' in the fifth stanza.
Agreed, so I deleted it.
Agreed, so I deleted it. Thanks :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ok I think it's done, writing
Ok I think it's done, writing poems in short breaks is not conducive to flow! Lol! Hugss all I've missed you all so.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Waterfall Lies
I was swept away - flow smoo - the balance was nicely weighted, the result equilibrium filled emotions - nice ~~A~~
my dear lady A I can't wait
my dear lady A I can't wait to catch up on everyone's works, but you certainly have some captivating titles I'm itching to read! I'm sick right now so I'm taking the opotunity through the pain in my bones and muscles to get some respite from pp and friends;) HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."