Splatters

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Unconsummated

Ink stained tears lace my pages

splatters of lost joys hit the paper

 like the slamming door in my face 

and my heart thrown to the pavement.

 

Life has grown dark 

Even hope is hiding

not even pinholes of light

have the decency to show.

 

ink stained tears fill my pages

as pain moves in to marry sorrow

such bedfellows are meant for eachother,

not like Me and you. 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

;) hugss 

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Beavis's picture

;-)

"Life has grown dark 
Even hope is hiding
not even pinholes of light
have the decency to show."

I am in awe! I love the way your poetry is evolving and expanding!

SSmoothie's picture

Wow what can I say except

Wow what can I say except strive from the bottom of a bottomless pit to say thankyou! ;) my dearest beavis you changed my life! :D hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Daniel-59's picture

Ok twisted Sister .....Just

Ok twisted Sister .....Just when was it You moved into My neighborhood ? 

Oh and I like it !


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks twisted bro, always

Thanks twisted bro, always been there kept it on the down low ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

Brilliant Imagery for Melancholia

...as pain moves in to marry sorrow...just when I suspect you have written the ultimate image for loss, you do this. Well penned - hugz ~~Lady A~~


 

 

SSmoothie's picture

Really? My dearest Allets ?

Really? My dearest Allets ? You think that of my piece? And everything I read of yours and a every thought captures me so, I wish I could write as think... Emote as I feel, and wrap it all up in wiseness like yours. I'm still working on the wise just got a spark of insight... Being wise means nothing if you don't take your own advice! Lol! I'm a mess! ;) catch 22 anything I do! Happiness at your comments much affection SS, 

 

... Hope to return to reading and commenting more soon! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am