Don't you know I'm Slipping?

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Dark stuff

Bitter taste 

swallow, swallow 

pour it in

stinging words 

etch thier way though

burning deep into my

pride.

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no kiss 

just kill

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Endless retributions

I don't feel the words 

on my tongue 

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No place 

Im lost 

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Slipping away

love 

found another 

to pay 

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But I don't feel 

anymore.

 

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Poetic_Eyes's picture

dang

dang smoothie...no matter what you feel, what you're going through your poetry never suffers. 

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 alas the poet does Ahh age

 alas the poet does Ahh age old story! Lol 

;) thanks my dear haven't been in the mood much so damn busy and everyone wants a piece :/ so tired its late here zzzzzzzzzzzz is calling hugss ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

...I don't feel the words on

...I don't feel the words on my tongue... Wowie! Bitter sweet but honed nicely with your whittling knife mind ~~ A~~


 

 

SSmoothie's picture

I love the way you get me so!

I love the way you get me so! Much love and respect dear lady A, your works not only teach they conspire to make us think more than one way. Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

Ecclecticism

is the title of one of my books. All over the place is one way to learn - that's me. I'll embrace anything to learn something new. You can't do it from the outside, you gotta be brave. Ya gotta go inside where the strangenesses live. You come out weird, a bit zonkers, but you get the knowledge that hopefully leads to wisdom. Thank you for your wisdom and friendship, Smooth One. Your are kind to read my work and I appreciate you and all who do so. Peace & Prayers ~~A~~