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 Searching the Silky Void

                             Across the Velveteen Sky 

How often I've stared.          

                             ...I've stared
at these same stars

                             at these same stars often and
and just never quite

                            caught glimpses of you

caught their light;

                           in their cosmic plethoras
photons and cones

                            somehow tilted
somehow misaligned,

                            to where you are
wavelengths askew.

                            Your brilliance travels
Your fire falls far

                            past my eyes,
from my eyes,

                            and I slowly
and I slowly

                            glow as I 
fade as I

                            search
search

                            for your
for your

                            soul...
light.

                 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

a poetic masterpiece Searching the Silky Void inspired  this response Love Lights Across the Velveteen Void and others, thus combining the titles and incorporating them in a visual sense as well. Deepest thanks to Beavis without whom this splash of delight would not be possible! 

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©9 January 2013 - 10:50am — SSmoothie
16 January 2013 - 8:32pm — MoonCruxCollision
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oh how spectacualr

oh how spectacualr

16 January 2013 - 11:32pm — SSmoothie
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Wow cruxnation

Thank you so much it means much as I am fast becoming a fan of your works once agin thankSS  :D ! 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

13 January 2013 - 8:15am — ashes_theartofb...
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Oh!

I love this!

The way you wrote it how whispered words of romantic.

*Swoon*

 

"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

14 January 2013 - 1:18pm — SSmoothie
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I was hoping you would! ;) 

I was hoping you would! ;) 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

9 January 2013 - 3:39pm — 9inety
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very nice

one of your very best

peace

"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

9 January 2013 - 3:52pm — SSmoothie
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Thanks ninety, I really

Thanks ninety, I really appreciate you saying so! Makes my heart sing to hear you say it;  but, the credit also belongs to beavis :)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

9 January 2013 - 3:13pm — Beavis
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Simply brilliant!!!!

You are the Master! This really is perfection! Two lovers whose hearts and souls are so intertwined, but still search for that the key to the distance that separates them. You've started from a one and created a one hundred!!! Exponential!!! Simply brilliant! Supermassive HugSS!!!

9 January 2013 - 3:50pm — SSmoothie
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Your beautifl piece is

Your beautifl piece is clearly the star, andthe inspiration Beavis, mwah! Love and hugss ! ;D so glad you approve! 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."