Souls on fire

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Soul's on fire
Burnt umber flesh
Charred from your desire
Burning orbs take flight
Drawing light echoes of extasy
Moth within a flame
Flame yearning to tame
Soul's on Fire
Catch my desire
Caress my soul.

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pinkdot7's picture

Beautiful!

This is a beautiful poem! It's so beautifully written!

Beavis's picture

Incredible!!!

One of my favorites!!! I absolutely love it! I will definately share this one over a bottle of wine; the only flaw that I see is that I'll have to confess to her this one isn't mine! ;-)

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;) you smmoooooothhhieeeee!

;) you smmoooooothhhieeeee! Lol! Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

You're the silky Ssmoothie,

You're the silky Ssmoothie, smokin' hottie here! As I read it, and work on the delivery, allow me to say "thank you!" now! ;-)

pldappls's picture

you are so awesome smoothie.

you are so awesome smoothie. i love all of your work. you are like one of the writers i respect the most on here. thank you for being awesome as fuck.

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On gosh! Thank you apples! I

On gosh! Thank you apples! I highly respect your charming wild style and I think you are a genius on many levels! So a big DITTO To you my dear t3srdeced! You made me have an uncontrollable grin :D I hate that, but I love it! Humbled hugss SS ;D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Btw I took 'as fuck' in a

Btw I took 'as fuck' in a good way, because. I couldn't imagine it as a negative ;P


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."