Auspicious suspicions

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Auspicious suspicions

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Third eye

The level.
Can you reach it?
I suspect few can.
An auspicious occasion?
I suspect your third eye opening
And the seeing is
Terror with the delight
The doorway is opening
Your intuition evolves
You just know things
Quietly you realise
There is no quiet.

Awake.
A powerful thing
And all will come calling for the
tear in the fabric of your gift
You won't trust yourself
At first,
Then you learn to filter,
To protect,
Your spirituality
Speaks for you;

You just know things.
You just know.
You're awake
Aware.
And the rest are still sleeping
You've come through,
Just a peek I suspect.
And so here we are
Welcome to the world
Through my eye.

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last updated 21 December 2012 - 1:24pm
©21 December 2012 - 12:50pm — SSmoothie

27 April 2013 - 12:34am — Jesster

Love love love this!!!

22 December 2012 - 10:49am — cevance

I was just making my rounds

I was just making my rounds reading, and of course I had to stop by your place. And what is it I found? A captivating picture through the mind's eye. A wonderful rendition.

Carl

22 December 2012 - 11:12pm — SSmoothie

Thank you cevance, I love

Thank you cevance, I love your name by the way, it always triggers a response in me about such things... Hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

23 December 2012 - 8:37am — cevance

My name also makes some

My name also makes some people cringe, because they insist I write the most foolish mishmash they've ever read. Afterwards, I'll read something they've written, so I can learn from their mastery of the art, and my laughter begins. (Did I just write that?)

23 December 2012 - 11:55am — SSmoothie

Ha ha! Please direct them to

Ha ha! Please direct them to me so that I can tell them they are full of shit! Dag hags! What do the conformers know about the innovations of poetry! Bah humbug! ;)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

23 December 2012 - 1:11pm — cevance

According to them, they are

According to them, they are enlightened experts, and the masses should froth at the mouth just by them rendering their magnificent opinion. As for me--I have no use for them. Perhaps the next time I encounter one of these assuming literary experts I'll suggest they come visit you.

My Regards.

23 December 2012 - 3:36pm — SSmoothie

Bahahahaha magnificent

Bahahahaha magnificent options and I suppose everyone is entitled to hear them? No thanks I wouldn't drool at any fine literary great reading my work, I require no such validation, though I enjoy feed back, I write from a carthatic and exploratory stance ;) I love your style and you sometimes unorthodox approach, let them drool, they can only try to change you into their protege who wants that?! You're too cool! Cheers rebel!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

22 December 2012 - 9:26am — Fitzgerald