Bad girl poetry slap

Hell! I'm so null and void,
My poetry is boring
An un cohesive mess with thoughts
Tracking right and left
No real pattern, rhyme or reason
Just my inspiration playing treason
I don't bother with structure for long
and I'm singing the same boring droll
Where is the leader that I once was?
The fearless warrior of the heart and life?

Better get the fuck back up SSmoothie
Cause your laying in the shit
Instead of being the shit...
Come on bitch you don't give up that easy
Burn your mother fucking worries
Let the critics eat their cake and choke on it
Get the fuck back up and jump n it!
This is your call
Wake up
Or fuck it up forever more!

Fuck no! What the hell?
Bring it!
I'm ready to go!

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battlepink's picture

Nice.... (I've written like 2

Nice....

(I've written like 2 pieces in the last month...sucks)

RoC's picture

Don't reward the critics

With cake, let them choke on a smoothie.
Because you are epic awesomeness, with absolutely no doubts or denials.
Super-ssmoothie.....to the post-place ;)


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

SSmoothie's picture

Awesome Roc thankyou, you

Awesome Roc thankyou, you always know how to lift my spirits! I can't thank you enough! We are very similar in the way we write, I enjoy our empathic workings! Hugss always SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

RoC's picture

You know it.

As a fellow conspirator across the great divide...I will continue to offer the wings your spirit needs.

Because, you are too awesome to be held down by anyone or anything.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

allets's picture

~~~just my inspiration

~~~just my inspiration playin' treason~~~oh yeah! get up smooth one, BE THE SHIT! - a poem to come back to again and betimes when the will is ill to bolster resolve and find the self inside the crap - indeed - Lady A


 

 

SSmoothie's picture

Booyeah (((LADY A)))) I am

Booyeah (((LADY A))))
I am the shit again!
Thank you for you wonderful hilarity and motivating energy! Love it! It what i always take away from your works, amazing energy focussed thoughts penned with the fire of inspiration! HugSS always


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am