Like toes sifting through sand catching nothing but grains of pain.

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She pays no mind to the darkening skies
The horizon thins to bands of midnight
and cool alabaster blue
the moon yet to Rise for company
As She makes her way through
the dark muddy waters
A veil of sadness over her chest
Falls down gently stirring
the surface of the glassy tides
Her toes carefully sift the silt
for a trace of her sunken heart.
The sadness pools around her feet
Dragging whirlpools of hope
pulling her back as she unwittingly travels deeper.
The love she cannot hold,
Tightly wrapped in another's fold
And as he chases her she chases him
But they are no match for the tides of fate
Turning for one last look
she sees three stars on the horizon
and blows them a kiss,
As she sinks and lay
With her drowned heart
Waiting for the tides to part.

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May continue to develop this just a 3 min draft

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Ok guys n gals I've revised is one

Ok guys n gals, I've revised is one for a minute, let me know what you think :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Beautiful!!!

I love it when you have time to work on your gems so that every facet can shine!!! ;-)

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Wow this is so sad, and

Wow this is so sad, and amazing! I can't believe it only took three minutes! I know I write quickly as I am inspired but I still take a while! Go SSmoothie! You write my soul it's wrapped with your words like a warm blanket, love your work! Hugs MS


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

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Thanks moon shadow! My mind

Thanks moon shadow! My mind is always racing far ahead of my fingertips and writing coordination... I miss so many great lines as they fly through! Was glad to capture some here just a few, so happy you enjoyed them too! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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;-)

I love what you can do in 3 minutes ;-)

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B! YOU'RE BACK,!!!! Happy

B! YOU'RE BACK,!!!! Happy dance! Happy dance! Missed you buddy! ;D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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;-)!!!!

I missed you too Dear!!!! Hopefully, I'm back for a while! ;-)

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Amen! Hope all went well? I'm

Amen! Hope all went well? I'm up to the eyeballs in dags theses daySs all tied up on knots I can't. Seem to get out of! Oh well, onwards to tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow... ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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So I've gathered! Let's see

So I've gathered! Let's see what we can do about that! Indeed, tomorrow awaits with the promise of a new sunrise, my Dear ;-) Same sun, same eyes, but let's look at it in a new way! HugSS!!!