Unburtsingly yours

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tragedy

Dreams burst through reality.

 

Mind shakes with head
Understood.
Understood...

 

No place for fantasy

Life beckons.

life beckons...

 

Pour out the drama
Let it wash over
Rain of pain.

rain of pain...

 

Fundamental

The one
Did not wait...
Did not wait.

 

Now Survival.
Shaken thoughts,
Burst dreams...

 

I want my bubble back!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Original: 

 

Dreams burst through reality.

Mind shakes with head
Understood!
Understood...

No place for fantasy

Life beckons!

life beckons...

Pour out the drama
Let it wash over
Rain of pain.

rain of pain...

Fundamental

The one
Did not wait...
Did not wait.

Now Survival.
Shaken thoughts,
Burst dreams...

I want my bubble back!

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Distilled Beauty

Once again you craft words that are bone-bare and full of wisdom and beauty. I am, as ever, amazed by what you write.

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me tooo hugs I love you

me tooo

hugs
I love you


Much Love

Ashley

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I love it! You are rocking this distilled format Dear!!!

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The style is a direct snatch

The style is a direct snatch from you master! ;) HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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;-)

I'd say you've earned your tiger and dragon! No more master stuff, please ;-) hand in hand, the pebble a grain of sand ;-)