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Soul mates I can't make my eyes heavy enough to sleep,
There's not enough lead that will kill the anticipation
Semi. Lucid dreams of our next encounter looming
The spaces between thinking and dreaming
Twist up into one aching frustration.
Butterflies have turned violent
stabbing me from inside
The cracks of light creep
The fingers of dawn scold me
pointing their disapproval
The stars mutter as they pass to
Light another's night
And I am left here in suspence
Cut up about our silent confrontation
The one only we know,
What we ignore
My heart exploding like a tattered mess
all over those butterfuckinglies
fuck there's just not enough lead!
Perfect, wonderful,
Perfect, wonderful, amazing,,,,,I love this
Awwww! Bpink! You make me
Awwww! Bpink! You make me blush, ...toxic nails... No one can beat that!!! HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Awesome SS! I think this is
Awesome SS! I think this is one of a kind! As only you could! Ta Mav.
If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream!
Thanks mav! Pease write more!
Thanks mav! Pease write more! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
more lead...
Hey there SSmoothie just to let you know that I have TONs of lead for just such occassions and would be glad to send some over... on the crit side, I think you meant a - in the third line instead of a period???? (Semi-Lucid.. or did you mean Semi. Lucid???). Enjoyed the way this poem got angrier as it progressed. No wonder you couldn't sleep. But "violent butterflie", now there is a sharp metaphor. Maybe the next poem will be the joy of those butterflies having accomplished their mission. ;o) ~~redzone
Need lots of lead.... And
Need lots of lead.... And things to extrude lead, with maximum velocity! ;
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks red;) I was half
Thanks red;) I was half asleep when iwrote it in the weeeeeeeeee hours of the moon everything I put up is in draft form all are welcome to suggest improve tweak, I don't like grammar cause I'm dyslexic and writing properly is draining enough without chasing tose pesky commas and periods and semi-colons etc... Lol! I meant betterfuckingflies.... But I like butterfuckinglies lies... But for my own twisted reason,
As for semi , semi sleep or semi-lucid. Hmmmmn both mean the same, semi like a ruck? sleep? Semi what do you prefer red, my learned friend?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."