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Ignorance killed the lovers stars
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tragedy It was there in your eyes again today
That mesmerising fire
Captivating how you hide the pain
Behind your ire,
every word you viciously speak
Shows an under current of tender regard
A lovers fierce heart kindled
By the mere presence of love
Hidden deeply behind the facade
Under Crushing disappointment
A powerful surge rises
beneath The mask of disdained guises
A lightness of being,
They never knew
or could read the stars
And ignore for us what we can't
Thus by ignorance is killed
Every star crossed lovers heart
A cold meteor,
a fallen star
If only for one moment
I could get you alone
perhaps you would see
The cracks in my heart of stone
Where you should be...
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All along...?
Revised ^^^ so far... So good...
Older version vvvvvv hmmmn?
It was there in your eyes again today
That mesmerising fire
Captivating how you hide the pain
Behind your ire,
every word you viciously speak
Shows an under current of tender regard
A lovers fierce heart kindled
Hidden deeply behind the facade
By the mere presence of love
Under Crushing disappointments
A powerful surge rises
A lightness of being
beneath The mask of disdain guises
If only for one moment
I could get you alone
perhaps you would see
The cracks in my heart of stone
Where you should have been.
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By the worlds rejection of astral plans
Ignorance will not kill love
But rather love will
steadfast and fiercely unmoving
Wait Till enlightenment
To follow the writing in the stars
As justice in ignorance sits blind
To the travesties of love
I love these
I love these lines!
"Captivating how you hide the pain
Behind your ire,
every word you viciously speak
Shows an under current of tender regard"
A slight re gig am i on the
A slight re gig am i on the right track b? ;D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Oh yeah!
And I love the ending!
"If only for one moment
I could get you alone
perhaps you would see
The cracks of my stone heart
Where you should have been."
It was great before, but I think it's even better now ;-p HugSs!
Lol!it wasn't quite there
Lol!it wasn't quite there yet... Nearly though....?
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ok I think this is it!
Ok I think this is it! Fingers crossed!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Ignorance
In ignorance, justice sits blind is the stronger for a last line. A strong start kind of fizzles out on the unseeable world that will not change when ignorance was mentioned three times and ire collapses into stars and patience (hmmmm...) - Lady A
Good call will do! Thanks :)
Good call will do! Thanks :) lady A
yes agreed a draft caught on the fly ideas just fell and on day I will organise them all! About 600 poems, philosophies and spiels cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."