Deleting myself

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Soul mates

I'm deleting my files
Deleting my memoirs
Deleting my smiles
Deleting everything.
The pain,
The longing
The suffering
The shuddering
The goosebumps
The sex in the air
The love in my heart
The hope in our lives
Ever crossing paths
This is the last
Time I pine
I yearn
I hope
I long
For what shall never be.
Heaven erased
Love forgotten
Deleted from this place
Never to embrace
The thoughts
Of what we must face
Deleted forever
Except for that one
Glorious
Trace
That
Touch...
Burned in this place
Undeleteable
Grace.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Not leaving pp, just trying to change what I probably can't anyway... HugSS

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GOHIL48's picture

great poem:)

great poem:)

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks ;)

Thanks ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

Ok a few tweaks, now it is

Ok a few tweaks,
now it is something I can be proud of! ;) ahhh! That satisfying feeling when a thing is complete! Ooh I think I just came up with an idea for a new poem! :D !


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

battlepink's picture

I'm fond of fast quick reads

I'm fond of fast quick reads that flow and make a strong point....this did it for me!

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks b-pink!

That makes me feel. Awesome cause I like pieces like that too! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Wow!

If only it were that easy! ;-) if you had a "recommended reads" folder, this would go in it!

SSmoothie's picture

Awe! Thank you so much b!!!

Awe! Thank you so much b!!! Love you! Thanks for helping me get the idea in my head I need o spend a little time refining ;D HugSS and more HugSS you made my night!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Love you too!

Love you too!