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Dark stuff The talons of your inscripted pain
weigh harshly upon my back
to shrug them off would only
drag them to cut further.
I let you rest upon my shoulders
I invited you in and gave you warmth
you have drawn it all out of me only
my last reserves are left.
and if these are gone and there is no more
I will have loved nothing more
you will have had it all.
Wow amazing write! So
Wow amazing write! So graphic! Incredible!!!! MS
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Thanks! I think it's a little
Thanks! I think it's a little creepy and unsettling too!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I concur...
... with the previous commentator. That first stanza is smashing. The words that spring to mind are horribly punnish, but fact is... 'you nailed it'. (sorry)
that first stanza. good golly
that first stanza. good golly gosh.