the stars in my eyes

I follow the stars
I live for tomorrow
crushed and bruised
the mead of my troubles
turned beautiful wine
I follow the stars

i remember yesterday

lived and over come 

troubles and toils 

turned humble spoils,

I followed the stars
I follow the stars...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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SSmoothie's picture

Made longer by popular demand

Made longer by popular demand ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Moonshadow's picture

Awed!

I agree!!! Too short! I didnt want it to end! I do hope you write more of it!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

MatthewWayne's picture

BOOOOO!!!! BOOOO!!!! Too

BOOOOO!!!! BOOOO!!!! Too Short ;) hahahaha I liked this one but I still stand by on what I said that it being too short :(


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

SSmoothie's picture

well, yes your right...

its a group a verses but i wasnt in the mood for writing more, going through some heavy stuff and rather than wreck it I left it as is. I think it can stand alone...? but I will write the rest just to honor you my wonderful inspiring writer ;D lol!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

MatthewWayne's picture

haha no worries, I know how

haha no worries, I know how that feels about not wanting to keep going to keep from ruining it.... But still its a very good piece.


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne