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RANTS vs TELL IT LIKE IT IS!!!

The covers hide more than your advances,
the shapes moving and sliding,
grunts and moans escaping,
writhing between eachother
like some freakishly white
wrinkled monster in my bed.
I sit there watching,
waiting for you to finish
before you realise I was there
watching by the bed as you
tore my heart and soul out
and poured it down her throat
and in her cunt instead.

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Sorry this is pure fiction but alas it came from somewhere as a finished write word after word fell down to freakishly write this sheet...

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last updated 27 July 2012 - 11:30am
©27 July 2012 - 2:53am — SSmoothie
27 July 2012 - 6:27am — Beavis
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Great write!

That was intense and savagely beautiful!

27 July 2012 - 8:42am — SSmoothie
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my dear beavis

Your comments alone encourage me to write! Thankyou I really appreciate that you understand it, ;) tight HugSS ;P

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

27 July 2012 - 6:21am — Moonshadow
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WAH!!! WTF??? I didn't expect

WAH!!! WTF??? I didn't expect that SSmoothie!!!?? Wow~ great in a brutal way!

Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

27 July 2012 - 8:44am — SSmoothie
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Lol! Thanks Moonshadow! So

Lol! Thanks Moonshadow! So glad its "in a good way!" ;) HugSS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."