figure me out.

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Humanity

Endless this discombobulated buggery
my mind frought with convoluted imagery
What penance beast must I procure for peace?

Michevieous centries at my posts
do nothing but look on at my boasts
What fall must I undertake in order to truly break?

Passions of the mind swallow hard upon my vanity
it slips down, a knot in my throat refusing sanctity
What revelations sent from serendipity will save my validity?

Continuous these hopeless onslaughts
prying eyes with envied sight and thoughts
What acceptance must I breed to find my leave?

Deciet and more lies! Im tired of spies,
I am weary of wearing my diaguise
What chicanery posts will prove my victory most?

Denials plague my psyche, hidden in the ghost of lies
Choking on all those things I must endure to survive
Why am I still here, breathing and alive?
How the hell did I, manage to survive?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

a draft of complication in a mishap compilation I hope to sort this congregation into a more fashionable and pleasing relation. HugSS... :)

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i like the rhyme scheme, has

i like the rhyme scheme, has a nice bounce to it. i like the description of confusion and perhaps some self-flagellation, wondering why one would put themselves through it. good stuff!

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Good day/night all

I am off! see you again some more, when the tide turns back to shore and we will be apart no more! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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ok I gigged it see

how it is if you like my dear dove come rest upon my words with a gentle flutter and tell me more the things that matter! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."