when it comes to you, Im weak.

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Soul mates

Weak
My resolve
My resistance
My vows
_________

Powerful
My emotion
Your desire
The attraction

_________

Absorbed
By your ambience
your firmness
your attentions
__________

Lost
In your eyes
Your presence
your atmosphere
___________

Found
In your devotions
your definitions
your laughter
___________

Timeless
My want
Your need
Our higher love
___________

Potent
My animal instincts
Your touch
Our desire
______________

Stronger
I must fight it
Exploit me
I am weak for you
Enter me any way you want.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hey master! short and neat ;b (I know it still needs work) HugSS grasshopper ;)

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Jeez! This is incredible!

Jeez! This is incredible! Excellent! You have mastered distilling your thoughts and words into pure poetry! And I think it's perfect as is ;-) This simply flowed through me, heart and soul - the intimacy, the passion, the beauty of it's simplicity gives it earnestness and sincerity. I love it! One of your best EVER!

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Wow!? Really? Hugss! :D

Wow!? Really? Hugss! :D


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