Weak
My resolve
My resistance
My vows
_________
Powerful
My emotion
Your desire
The attraction
_________
Absorbed
By your ambience
your firmness
your attentions
__________
Lost
In your eyes
Your presence
your atmosphere
___________
Found
In your devotions
your definitions
your laughter
___________
Timeless
My want
Your need
Our higher love
___________
Potent
My animal instincts
Your touch
Our desire
______________
Stronger
I must fight it
Exploit me
I am weak for you
Enter me any way you want.
Jeez! This is incredible!
Jeez! This is incredible! Excellent! You have mastered distilling your thoughts and words into pure poetry! And I think it's perfect as is ;-) This simply flowed through me, heart and soul - the intimacy, the passion, the beauty of it's simplicity gives it earnestness and sincerity. I love it! One of your best EVER!
Wow!? Really? Hugss! :D
Wow!? Really? Hugss! :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."