Destroy Olympus. [Gods of Pain]

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tragedy

The breeze is soft and inviting
cooling and a welcome reprieve.
my thoughts turn to us and our lies
theres so many things going on
and theres no telling all sides.

If I did envow all that I knew
about me, about you
would you fall to pieces
and land in my puddle of desperation,
or will you harden like stone
and crush my salvation?

It was all so simple way back when.
though the God's rolled the dice
and played as they may,
a well devised game of demise,
choices made against the odds
for the entertaining of heartless gods.

They pluck out my hope at will
and build it up in me still with ease
torture and torment within a hairs breadth
I welcome each pain for the brief pleasure
prior i might or might not receive.

Do you feel the same or am I alone,
the object of this etherially demented game?
on this board of searing heart troubles
are you just another pawn they reign?

There will come a time when
the Gods will have to reckon with
my torn heart and the three of us
will rush upon them and turn their
white world dark.

I will stab thier heads on idols
and streak them across thier own board
I will relish in thier new understanding of pain
and make them fight every fight again!

They will have their heads
turned in a million ways of insane
thoughts and deeds crosswired
inside out they will traverse the pains
they will be reformed into new gods
that a heart of understanding gains.

I will take away every light
I will grab the stars from heaven
and hide them from view
i will douse their sun and moon
and all the heavenly bodies that shine.

I will tear their world apart
and when i hear their whimpers
crying in the dark,
I will make them wait the same
aeons we have been apart.

I will make a symphony of sorrow
out of thier crying hearts
and play it loudly ringing in their ears
with the beating drums of our own hearts.

And when they have come
to a place of understanding
about the wrath of passion;
that no man or God withstanding
can twist the flames of an unconditional love
They must not try and seek it in us
for ours is a love not shared by these cruel
masters above.

Till then we will wait as we must
till our ashes turn to dust
and united as one light destroy
with love's wielding might
the game.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

yeah, needs work on some stanzas but at least the intent is there! :) "Danger Construction Zone!" OOOOHHHH getting there!!! and changed it a gain...????

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I Love Greek Mythology! I

I Love Greek Mythology! I love how you have used it here!!! Awesome write!!!


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Thanks I think this one is

Thanks I think this one is epic too! I love the second last stanza most of all! That's if itis not to facetious of me to. Say! ;) HugSS


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i think its done!

i think its done!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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ok heres my latest attempt

let me know how its going? cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."