Mist of Love

V2

Through the
lightly ascending
mist of love,
I see
a clearer picture
through love's swirling vapours.

Inhale...

Exhale...

The fibres
of my being
glow.

It is you,
always will be you
though,
it can never be.

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V1

through the
lightly ascending mist of love
I see a clearer picture
as vapour love swirls
inhale exhale
the fibres of my being glow
it Is you, always will be you
though it can never be.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Love complicates beautifully!

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hey beaves, took your advice a switcheroony and an ing... ;)

Check it out? thanks :) SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Love it!

Love it!

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Another great write!

Haunting and wistfully beautiful!

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oh beavis

You make my heart sing beaves you give my racing mind a calm space to reflect and compose my thoughts :) HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Plus you're a great editor

Plus you're a great editor and inspirator ;) made up word, yep.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Make up anything you want,

Make up anything you want, just keep writing! Hugs back at ya!