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OBSERVATIONS...

You dont inspire grand poetry
Yet, you have the power to enrage me.
You don't inspire grand gestures
Yet, you can sweep me off my feet.
You are my ordinary everyday love,
A blank uninspired page lending itself
To doodling in the corners.
Grand by definition some believe;
Yet, I know different.
we are eachothers 'for granted'.
A prop, a scaffold,
a rubber mould, ignored...
till our cages are rattled
Then, in a flickered memory,
Shines the extraordinary.
And that doodle explodes to life
All over the page!
But it's not poetry.

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nightlight1220's picture

This is really cute. I love

This is really cute. I love it!

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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hahahahaha~ he didnt laugh.

hahahahaha~ he didnt laugh.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Still awed... Love this.

Still awed... Love this.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Good revolutions of the sky

Good revolutions of the sky dear fellows parting is such mellow sorrow, but I shall see you all tomorrow hugSs


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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awww,

Shucks! ;) Needs a grammar check. Lol,


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

;-)

I love it!

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It's that last line isn't it?

It's that last line isn't it? Wonder where I learned that from? ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Lol! Nope, it's the whole

Lol! Nope, it's the whole thing! I love it! The more I read it, the better it became! Great write! ;-)

Beavis's picture

But that last line is a

But that last line is a killer! ;-)

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You know it was influenced by

You know it was influenced by burn. Must have been those keys? Great poem! I think you have been my greatest influence to date! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."