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the rise (part 2)
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PHILOSOPHICAL SS my fingers tap
in rapid sequential
synchronicity
Vibrateing with
deafening focus.
The plan
draws itself
In my mind.
Each round of taps
heralds a
deftly covered trap.
The corner
Of a smile creeps up
flattened suddenly,
by insecurity then
Washed away
In a righteous wave
A champion desperado
Making ready,
Tap-tap-tap tap,
Tap, tap-tap tap
A rumbling crescendo,
I feel it...
Beautifully written and
Beautifully written and enticing! This was worth waiting for and shows your talent as a wordsmith. You deftly use assonance, alliteration, rhymes, even onomatopoeia to craft this into a truly flowing and graceful poem! Excellent writing! And I know YOUR rise will continue ;-)
awww, shucks :)
*blush* you're too kind, its only because of your generous guidance HugSS grasshopper :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."