Naturally short

a haiku poem,
beautiful nature reflects
though much too concise.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

just having some fun! ;)

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Beavis's picture

Well done!

Excellent, though I can feel you straining at the leash of constraint ;-)

I wish had your ability to write so well on the fly. You are always so eloquent, and as I've come to know how you write, it just leaves me that much more in awe! I don't know how you do it! Rock on!

SSmoothie's picture

awww Shucks thanks!

but Im struggling with the juxtaposition part... Who'd of thought me an artist mad about juxtaposition in every sense! struggling with a haiku which demands it!!!! wow! you are such an impressive inspiration. to work on something to hone it and shape it so well I envy the patience!!! still I will try to get it right. Your dedication is rubbing off on me... oh-oh!!! ;) hugSS

but man... they are short!!! lol got me there! ha ha ah ha ha ah ha ha!


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Beavis's picture

With your talent, there's

With your talent, there's nothing you can't do!